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《真正的美》True Beauty [英] 华兹华斯

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True beauty dwells in deep retreats            真正的美寓于谦谦相待，
　Whose veils is unremoved                             面纱何须撩开，
Till heart with heart in concord beats,      直到心心相印息息同怀，
　And the lover is loved.                                  恋人彼此钟爱。

－ by William Wordsworth (1770－1850)

［附1］：无心剑2译本－［附2］：岩子译本《美与爱》－

世间深处真美隐，真美隐藏得很深，真美含蓄不露

　面纱遮掩见朦胧，直到两颗心共鸣，朦胧面纱之后

直到两心奏谐音，两个人相亲相爱，心心相印时候

　彼此相爱意相融。面纱才会被揭开。彼此亲爱不够

－译于2008年11月23日－译于2010年8月5日

【附3】：吕志鲁教授译本－ 【附4】：李景琪译本－

《真美》

面纱长遮盖，                         真美深藏匿，
  真美费疑猜。                         纱幕恒遮蔽，
待到心交融，                         待到两心共鸣时，
  你痴我也呆。                         此爱最甜

－2007年8月译

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