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《隼》HAWK 【美】宛荻·伐德洛克

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（原诗寓意深邃，逢双行押韵; 今试以平仄互叶、行行入韵之七三言律句自度。）

The forest is the only place 满目萧森一统焉，

Where green is green and blue is blue. 青是青，蓝复蓝，

Walking the forest I have seen 纵步林间几洞穿。

Most everything. I've seen a you 忽睹君，黄褐眼，

With yellow eyes and busted wing. 败羽一身翎翼残，

And deep in the forest, no one knew. 林深处，无人见。

　　　　　　　　　－by Wendy Videlock

【附1】：无心剑译本－【附2】网上译本－

世间唯有森林，丛林大世界，

绿是绿，蓝是蓝。五色各分明。

漫步其中，我看见曾在林中走，

一切。看见一个你，阅尽世间情。

黄色眼睛、折翅伤翼。伤心抬眼处，

而密林深处无人知。铩羽伴顠零。

－译于2010年9月3日

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《隼》HAWK 【美】宛荻·伐德洛克

【附1】：无心剑译本－ 【附2】网上译本－

历史上的今天

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