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《咏娶了少女“玫瑰”的百合》【奥】赫里克

2014-03-29 01:23:06| 分类：英诗汉译 | 标签： |举报 |字号大中小订阅

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（原诗抑扬格５音步，AABB韵；拙译以10字句从之。－欢迎批评指正！）

What times of sweetness this fair day foreshows, 当百合迎娶玫瑰作娘子，

Whenas the Lily marries with the Rose!　　　　定将是美好的良辰吉日！

　What next is look'd for? but we all should see　可我们接下来全在期待－

　To spring from thee a sweet posterity.　　　　　见到你生养的娇娇婴孩。

【附1】：木草堂译本－

《咏一枝百合，娶了位叫玫瑰的少女》

何时晴空里传来佳音，

百合迎娶玫瑰的喜讯！

　期盼什么？大家都心［急］，

　看你家跳出俊俏子［女］。

【附2】：fang 译本－

吉日预兆良辰，

百合玫瑰结婚！

大家期待什么？

　甜美宝贝降生。

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