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商籁体：《清晨赋别诸友》【英】济慈

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ON LEAVING SOME FRIENDS AT AN EARLY HOUR

（原诗五步抑扬格，基本10音节，韵式为ABBAABBA CDECDE；

拙译每行12字，
以8a+6b韵谐之。）

Give me a golden pen, and let me lean

给我金笔，让我倚着锦簇花团，
　On heaped-up flowers, in regions clear and far.

　在遥远的净土－那里一尘不染。
　Bring me a tablet whiter than a star,

　给我比星星还要莹白的书板*，
Or hand of hymning angel when 'tis seen

或是唱着赞美诗的天仙－且看－
The silver strings of heavenly harp atween.

她的手撩拨天堂竖琴的银弦。
　And let there glide by many a pearly car,

　让珍贵的车驾悄然往来其间，
　Pink robes, and wavy hair, and diamond jar,

　还有粉色袍服，卷发和钻石罐，
And half-discovered wings, and glances keen.

半裸露的翅膀，及敏感的流盼。

The while let music wander round my ears,

此刻，让音乐在我的耳际缭绕，
　And as it reaches each delicious ending,

　当美妙的乐章每到一曲终了，
　　Let me write down a line of glorious tone,

　　且让我记下一行辉煌的曲调，
And full of many wonders of the spheres:

以及满目奇观－在那重重九霄：
　For what a height my spirit is contending!

　因为我正奋发向上，心比天高！
　　'Tis not content so soon to be alone.

　　－它不甘心这么快就孤单寂寥。

　 Oct. －Nov. 1816

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　－by JOHN KEATS

译注：*书板（tablet）－古时供镂刻或书写文字的平板，用木料或石材制成。

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