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《歌》Song【英】克丽丝汀娜·罗赛蒂

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（原诗交韵ABAB ABAB CDCD；

拙译以行行一韵到底谐之。）

She sat and sang alway
她老坐着哼哼唱唱－
　By the green margin of a stream,
　在碧绿的溪水岸旁，
Watching the fishes leap and play
望着鱼跃嬉波逐浪－
　Beneath the glad sunbeam.
　沐浴明媚阳光。

I sat and wept alway
我老坐着潸然泪淌，
　Beneath the moon's most shadowy beam,
　天上幽月何其微茫，　　
Watching the blossoms of the May
望着五月花儿开放，
　Weep leaves into the stream.
　为叶落溪流哀伤。

I wept for memory;
我哭因勾起回想，
　She sang for hope that is so fair:
　她唱为美好愿望。
My tears were swallowed by the sea;
我的泪被吞入汪洋，
　Her songs died on the air.
　她的歌在天空消亡。

－by Christina Georgina Rossetti（1830－1894）

【附】：徐家祯教授译本－

她总坐着歌唱

　在小溪的绿岸上；

看着鱼儿的跳跃和嬉戏

　晒着欢乐的阳光。

我总坐着哭泣，

　月光无比阴晦而微茫；

望着五月的鲜花，

　为溪里的落叶流泪哀伤。

我的悲涕是为回忆；

　她的歌唱是为美好的希望：

我的眼泪被大海吞噬；

　她的歌儿在空中消亡。

＊英国女诗人罗赛蒂的这首诗中，“她”是乐观的，因为她总是歌唱和希望；而“我”则是悲观的，

因为总是哭泣和回顾。但是，最后两句诗说：不管歌唱还是悲泣，最终的结果却并无两样，因为都是

消失灭亡。所以，诗人归根到底还是个悲观主义者吧！全诗共两节，译诗双句押［ang/uang????］韵。

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