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《落叶片片，落英纷纷》【英】兰道

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（原诗五步抑扬格，英雄双行体；

拙译每行１0字，韵式从之。）

Leaf after leaf drops off, flower after flower,

纷纷然落英，片片儿落叶，

Some in the chill, some in the warmer hour:

－在那寒冷或是炎热时节：
　Alike they flourish and alike they fall,

　一般儿繁茂，一般儿枯萎，

　And Earth who nourished them receives them all.

　大地滋养花叶，悉数收回。　
　　Should we, her wiser sons, be less content

　　生命结束时倒入她怀里，

　　To sink into her lap when life is spent?

　　聪颖的后裔，竟不太满意？

－by Walter Savage Landor （1775－1864）

【附1】：徐家祯教授译本－

《叶子一片片落下》

一片片叶子落下，一朵朵花，

有的在寒冬，有的却在盛夏：

　它们都曾繁茂昌盛，也都凋零衰飒，

　滋养花叶的大地把它们全部收下。

　　我们呀，大地更为睿智的儿子，

　　生命结束回落她怀抱时竟要讨价还价？

＊这里又是一首英国诗人兰道关于死亡的诗歌。在他八十九年漫长生命的最后阶段，最常思考

的一个问题，一定就是“死亡”。他认为人的死亡，就像花叶的殒落，这是不可避免的自然

规律，所以，应当听其自然，不必恐惧抱怨。原诗仅六句，以AABBCC模式押韵，我改为双

句押［ia］韵。

【附２】：飞旋的草帽译本－

《叶落叶，花落花》

Leaf after leaf drops off, flower after flower,

叶落叶，花落花，

Some in the chill, some in the warmer hour:

各执寒暑在天涯。

　Alike they flourish and alike they fall,

　一样荣华皆飘落，

　And Earth who nourished them receives them all.

　陈泥载身一朝没。

　　Should we, her wiser sons, be less content

　　大地儿孙何不满？

　　To sink into her lap when life is spent?

　　终向怀中坠不返。

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