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《灰末》Dust【美】蒂丝黛儿

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（原诗两节，偶行分别入韵；拙译每行字数谨遵

原诗音节，略丰韵谐之。—欢迎切磋针砭！）

When I went to look at what had long been hidden,

很久以前我将宝石秘藏某处，

A jewel laid long ago in a secret place,

当我去察看时已事隔多年，

I trembled, for I thought to see its dark deep fire—

我颤慄—以为可见深暗的闪光，

But only a pinch of dust blew up in my face.

却只剩一撮灰—还溅了我一脸。

I almost gave my life long ago for a thing

许久前我为它几乎付出生命，

That has gone to dust now, stinging my eyes—

而今成灰末，刺痛我眼睛；

It is strange how often a heart must be broken

—诡异的是人心往往非得破碎，

Before the years can make it wise.

岁月方能使之聪颖。

—by Sara TEASDALE

【附1】：王述尧教授七古译本—

《尘灰》

珠宝秘处久搁置，

前去【观】看多年藏。

欲观暗火心震颤，

一撮尘灰扑脸庞。

生命浑付获此物，

埋入尘灰伤我目。

却怪此心常须碎，

方得岁月寸慧驻。

【附2】：zleooo译本—

《齑粉》

多年前我将宝石放在一处隐秘地[点]

当我去把这珍藏已久的宝石察看

我颤抖着，以为会看见它暗暗发光

谁料只有一小撮灰尘直扑我的脸

多年前我几乎付出生命去换取它

可现在它已成灰尘，弄伤我的双眼

奇怪的是人们往往必须先伤透了心

岁月才能使他们变得聪明一[点]

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