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《爱与欲》LOVE&DESIRE【英】柯勒律治

2018-06-26 13:05:12| 分类：英诗汉译 | 标签： |举报 |字号大中小订阅

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（原诗抑扬格；前首偶行入韵，后首英雄双行体。拙译

每行字数谨遵原诗音节，韵式从之。—欢迎切磋针砭！）

LOVE爱

She wept with pity and delight,

喜极而泣，惹人垂怜，

She blush'd with love and virgin shame;

情爱带着处女羞赧，

And, like the murmur of a dream,

她像是在梦中呓语，

I heard her breathe my name.

轻轻将我呼唤。

DESIRE欲

Where true Love burns Desire is Love's pure flame ;

真爱的欲念似炉火纯青；

It is the reflex of our earthly frame,

是我辈泥胎俗身的反映；

That takes its meaning from the nobler part,

其意义来自更高的层面，

And but translates the language of the heart.

那只是传释心灵的语言。

—by Samuel Taylor Coleridge（1722—1834）

【附】:hkdcsh译本—

<愛>

她楚楚動人快樂地哭泣， 10A

臉上泛著那初戀靦腆的紅光; 12

又像是在那沉睡中的夢囈， 11A

聽她将我名字輕輕呼[喚]。 10

<慾>

真愛之慾的燃燒乃爐火純【淨】的愛情，15A

它是我們泥塑凡軀的反應， 11A

【蘊藉】更加崇高層面上的含義， 12B

它只是心靈語言【另一种】翻譯。 12B

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