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《情债》Debt【美】蒂丝黛儿

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（原诗两节，偶行分别入韵；拙译每行字数谨遵原诗音节，略丰韵谐之。－欢迎切磋指正！）

What do I owe to you

我有什么欠你— 6

　Who loved me deep and long?

　你曾爱我深长？ 6A

　　You never gave my spirit wings

　　—从未给我心灵翅膀， 8A

　Or gave my heart a song.

　或为我心歌唱。 6A

But oh, to him I loved,

可我爱过他哟， 6

　Who loved me not at all,

　他对我总不爱， 6B

　　I owe the open gate

　　我欠开放之门— 6

　That led through heaven's wall.

　曾通天堂墙外。 6B

－by Sara TEASDALE

【附】：刘荣跃译本－

《债》

你长久地深深爱我，

　我欠着你什么？

　　你从未给我精神以翅膀

　或为我的心儿唱一支歌。

但是啊，我欠着所爱的人

　【（】他一点没把我爱上【）】

　　那扇敞开的大门―

　它【会】穿过天堂之墙。

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